Friday, June 16, 2006
humanity..
Alrighty folkks...a poem on Humanity...honestly i dunno how it sounds its really abstract..
Humanity...
Sitting here on this flimsy white hull I glance back to land...
Trees, grass, flowers all swaying in the wind…each micro ecosystems on its own...
The awe of the complicity of this world just dawned on me...
For in each of these micro systems there exist organisms…
Organisms which have a heart
A head…
They feel, hear move and are just as complicated...
Yet we neglect them and squash them,
Squash them like we do upon other humans...
Human’s tt get in the way of our cause…
A cause which is of no real importance,
A cause of materialistic nature...
Oh pour scorn on the cause
Yes go ahead. For it is a fact we all wish to forget
A fact tt all we are is superficial...
Superficial in nature, materialistic in thinking…
The many flaws in human has risen
And yet despite this we suppress it more...
We wish to forget it for we all think we’re perfect
But yet it doesn’t seem to work...
What if for once we embrace this opportunity…?
This oppoturnity to improve and better ourselves...
Bringing peace to the whole world…
Merging all discord into peace
Only then can humanity progress to a further extent...
But then again I sit here on this vast ocean...
I am a mere boy…
Nothing more but a fickle mind trying to make sense of the world…
For right now tt is all I will ever be...
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and then theres khalis's version..
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Sitting on this flimsy white hull
gazing back at the land
the flora and fauna looks so dull
each made by God's hands
they're organisms which have a heart
as complicated as we are
yet we taint our hands wif their blood
does that make us a God from the star?
Crush them
like we do upon other humans
Humans
that get in the way of our cause
a cause
wif no real importance
but instead
of materialist
of materialistic nature
What if we embrace this oppturnity?
to improve and better ourselves
bringing peace to all humanity
Only then can we further progress
But then again I sit here on this vast ocean
an ocean dats contiuousli dying
trying to make sense of all this notion
and i will keep trying
until i suceed
until i suceed
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honestly i dont noe which sounds better....diff styles i suppose...i like both though...so u decide !..go tag
Posted by Ash at 7:58 PM